FINAL DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

FINAL DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD:

I have changed small things in my article such as Hazel Grace having an album in the 'Alternative Charts' she now had her album in the general charts, to show she is a big star and that she is a common household name; proving that the simple cover and clear photo of her is enough to sell the magazine, as people would buy it knowing who she is, instead of being enticed in with slogans and free giveaways, posters, and competitions. 

Other than that and a few typing errors i have not changed anything from my updated double page spread: http://hollyarmitagelccw13.blogspot.co.uk/2013/03/changes-to-my-double-page-spread.html

The double page spread is different to the other components  however i feel that this is a convention used by magazines, as not every double page spread follows the same layout or colour scheme as the magazine, as it depends on which artist or band the magazine has written the article about. I think the images on the left hand page add to the quirky nature of the artist, as well as displaying their personality through both the various facial expressions, and their responses to the questions in the interview. 

Changes to my Double Page Spread

I have made a few changes to my double page spread including correcting the typo in the pull out quote and adding credit for the writer and photographer who's names i have made up. I have also made the text smaller so it is now font size 9 and i have added more questions to make the interview longer and more in depth, as a response to my feedback. 
I have also changed the font of my title and i have removed the quote that was underneath as it looked too busy. I debated making the subtitle smaller however, i feel that a title on it's own is bold and stands out more. Also, because she is an established artist i didn't feel like i had to write anything cheesy such as "Hazel Grace reveals all" as her interview would explain everything. I have used the same font as the one used for my page number to keep the themes and styles consistent throughout the magazine. 

Completed Mock

I have completed my front cover, contents and double page spread using Photoshop and i have included photo's of my cover model as well as photo's i've taken at festivals and of friends in the past.
I like the basic front cover as Clash's influence means it's simple and not overcrowded with fonts and pictures of other artists, which ties in with the data collected from my audience survey; as they said they liked covers that weren't too busy.
I also like the purple background and how it compliments the outfit "Hazel Grace" is wearing as i took idea from my past cover attempts and stuck with a matching colour scheme, not a contrasting one. I like the font (i have used 'Ever After') as it reminds me of fonts used for book titles such as The Great Gatsby - old, vintage and show-like, which ties in with my theme.

If i could improve the contents page i would add more writing and quotes that would give the reader more information of what they would find on which page, as i feel it's too bare and not in enough detail to engage and entice the reader; however, i feel the 'subscribe today' in the bottom right hand corner stands out and draws the reader in, as they might like to find out about subscribing to the magazine.
I have added things to the magazine that the audience who participated in the survey said they would like to see, as this means it would appeal to the target market. I have added things such as reviews and concerts/gigs as these were specifically asked for by the survey participators.

For my double page spread i have used the gradient tool for the background, as it looks like a professional magazine and adds depth to the page. However, i'm not sure that the blue text is bold enough for it to be easy to read, but i have used the same colour for the quote at the beginning; as it has been taken from Hazel Grace's shirt.

When designing the left hand page of my double page spread i styled in in the same way as the Zooey Deschanel Allure shoot, which many other magazines and models have done too. I think it works well, however i am going to wait for feedback before deciding on whether i am going to use the same layout for my final version.

Mock Magazine Photos

Holly Armitage's photostream on Flickr.

Taken 04/02/13
Photos for the front cover, contents and double page spread.
(One possibility for the final Magazine)

First draft of Double Page Interview (Article)

Music Magazine Article by

Feedback: 

Re-word "Any stories you want to share whilst touring?" as it doesn't sound right. (from @almosttonystark on twitter)

Examples of double page spreads:

This double page spread features a large A4 image of the singers on one side, and the article on the other. A large title runs along the bottom as it relates to both pages, and the white and black fonts have been used to stand out against the background and photo.
'Sing out Sisters' uses alliteration and makes the title stick in the readers head; it is also short and sharp, giving the reader an overview of the singers. 
A caption of the photo has also been used on the left hand side, to explain who the singers are and what they're called. 
The article itself is set in clear columns that makes the format of the page easy to see. There are also inset photo's that have been used to break the page of text up, they also give the reader more information about the band, as well as something to look at other than reading the text. A colourful dropcap has also been used as the 'I' in the blue square shows clearly where the article starts. 
I like the simple layout of the pages, as the columns of the article make it look professional and also means it's easy to read, which means the audience will enjoy it more. The large photo also gives the reader something to either cut out and keep, or look at as the read the article.
The sisters have been shot in a natural pose, adn we can see they have not been viewed throught the Male Gaze, as they are younger and less mature than celebrities such as Scarlett Johansson. It also adds to the style of their singing, as they're sisters it's clear they're united and together all the time.

 
The large USA behind the image of Florence is eye catching and subtle, as it is only a few shades darker than the background, but it makes a statement about the article. The title, 'Got the Love' links to one of her songs, and fans of her music will already be enjoying the article. A small introduction has also been used, which may explain to the reader what the article is about, as well as giving extra information about the artist. A dropcap that matches the title font has been used to make the article look professional, and also it adds to the layout of the page as the readers know where the article starts. 
The article is then written in columns that are easy to read and look professional opposite the cut out image of Florence. Her black outfit matches the black title, and the red flag stands out due to the monotone background and colour palette of the page.
I like this double page article because there is a clear contrast between the dull and bright colours, and i think it is laid out professionally, and i would find it easy to read. 
Florence is sitting in quite a seductive way, as you can see her legs, and we begin to view her through the Male Gaze as the high heeled shoes and pose make her look like a sexy woman that men would prefer to look at. However, her style and look is also idealised by females, as they would want the sex appeal and look of Florence.

This double page spread features an A4 picture on the right hand side, and columns of text are on the left. A large pull out quote has been displayed over the double page spread, which reads 'I could be playing to 15,000 people at Madison Square Garden and i'd stil have a chip on my shoulder'; and this makes the readers want to find out why he would and what he is on about.

The article has been written in columns and the pull out quote separates the text and makes it easier to read.

The use of the red quote also adds colour to the page, and ties in with the colthing the artist is wearing. This adds to the colour scheme and adds an element of brightness in comparison to the black, white and grey tones on the page.
The member of the band pictured on the right hasn't been photographed in a usual studio location as the background of the photo seems like he is standing on an old car, adding to the edgy look of both the band and the style of the article. His pose has connotations of Elvis Presley (Jailhouse Rock) and this emphasizes his love for music, and possibly his inspiration for his career and life.