Sunday, 3 February 2013

First draft of Double Page Interview (Article)



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Re-word "Any stories you want to share whilst touring?" as it doesn't sound right. (from @almosttonystark on twitter)

1 comment:

  1. Nicely done. The tone and register are both appropriate. It does read like a real interview. The interview may need to be slightly longer though-you'll have an idea when you add it to your dps.

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