Feeback on Mock/Draft Magazine

Feedback from Mrs Abrahamson:



Feedback from Mr Ford:

Front Cover

- Good use of font

-Likes the background colour and the way i've styled the artist

-Consider removing 'In this issue' and 'win tickets to see three blind mice'

Contents page

- Needs tweaking in terms of the size of the boxes and the text

-It looks as if it belongs to a different magazine

-All images need to look as good as the one on the cover

Double page spread

-Try a different font for the title (possibly the font used on the cover)

-Credit the photographer + Interviewer

-Doesn't look like it belongs to the same magazine as the cover

-Need more text in the interview

Things i plan on changing:

-Consider removing 'In this issue' and 'win tickets to see three blind mice'

-Tweak the contents in terms of the size of the boxes and the text. Remove background, try it with a white background (conventional)

-Use better quality images in the contents page, take new ones

-Try a different font for the title on the double page spread (possibly the font used on the cover) Look at other magazines for inspiration titles/ play on words/ catchy lines to grab the audience

-Credit the photographer + Interviewer

-Need more text in the interview  (possible)

-Change 'in' to 'is' in the pull out quote

-Experiment with different photos on the cover but don't change the colour scheme entirely

-If i stick with the same photo, cut the hair out in a neater way

-Add anchor/quote to 'Freya Blue' on contents

-Put a number in the bottom photo

-INCLUDE BRANDING TO TIE THE THREE PIECES TOGETHER TO MAKE IT LOOK LIKE THEY BELONG TO THE SAME MAGAZINE | use page number e.g. 14 -- State -- January Issue